ChaoAmber@feddit.uk to CoupleMemes@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 1 month agoCereal is still goodimagemessage-square60linkfedilinkarrow-up1418arrow-down128
arrow-up1390arrow-down1imageCereal is still goodChaoAmber@feddit.uk to CoupleMemes@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 1 month agomessage-square60linkfedilink
minus-squareArcaneSlime@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·1 month agoThis script feels incredibly stilted, it needs a rewrite with more feeling, needs to sound more like how humans speak not HR “people.”
minus-squareCheesyFingers@piefed.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·1 month agoYes, i wrote it that way. It’s not a script to be followed—it’s about the idea.
This script feels incredibly stilted, it needs a rewrite with more feeling, needs to sound more like how humans speak not HR “people.”
Yes, i wrote it that way. It’s not a script to be followed—it’s about the idea.